This is an excerpt that a friend of mines wrote. I will be writing the female’s P.O.V in a few days. Tell me what you think.
5am, sitting on the edge of the bed. He rubs his head, staring off into space,
reliving the moments that just took place. Shes lying there, naked, sound asleep
wit a look of satisfaction. He looks for his pants. They’re lying in a pile on the
floor along wit her panties, skirt, high heels and empty bottles of expensive
liquors. An incredible night for the young man. 27 years old, great paying job,
well established, independent, full of life. He zips up his pants, pulls his shirt
down over his well toned and tattooed body, puts on his $170 Jordan’s, grabs
the keys to his 2013 Mercedes, makes his way to the door and never looks back.
For this is merely a routine night. Mission accomplished. Adjusting his hat as
he makes his way to the car, he thinks about how easy it is to get whatever u
want out of life wit swag, determination, and a pocket full of money.
He barely remembers her name. A pretty young thing that caught his eye while
sitting at the bar enjoying his favorite drink. Hennessy on the rocks to be exact.
He tells the bartender to send her any drink of her choice. She looks at him,
smiles and approaches him and introduces herself. His smile is remarkable, her
smell is amazing. He, 6″2″ 200lbs to her 5″8″ 145lbs frame, hips thighs and
everything all in the right place. Small talk is all that’s needed, then back to her
place for some real fun. He conquers her wit the slightest of ease… Making his
way home, his conscious begins to get the best of him. Living a double life is all
fun and exciting until reality begins to catch up. At home he has a beautiful
girlfriend that’s been down for him for 3 years and counting. Through all the
ups and downs, she’s been by his side. His selfish ways over shadow the real
prize he has.